I loved how you introduced the poem, so blunt and straight to the point. I love how you take a tone of revenge in this piece, you just want the person to feel how you felt when they did soemthing to you. The ending was brilliant i must say. Well written.

How well this speaks of the final straw and the beginning of a new..Excellent piece

So I can free myself
And live life again for me

^ I suggest you end this without 'for me' .. try and read it loud this way, it would sound prettier.

Okay, I really like the obvious and subtle rhymes here, and your tone, it's not 'sad' like I thought it would be but it was rather outrageous and bold, the way I would've liked more. And yes... I really like the idea of wanting to do what the lover has done to you. An Eye for an Eye... that is what it is! great piece

I like the tone of the poem, but you know I'm glad that you only wish it because in my opinion, it might hurt you even more if you actually did it.

Good piece

This is a strong poem, the use of words is powerful and the tone as well 5/5

This poem shows how ur really strong facing ur pain:)
Its really powerful and greatly written:)
I love it:)

Awesome,

I love the rhyming and there's a certain tone I can feel when you're telling them that you are over what they did and you want them to feel the same way you did for a change.

Great piece.

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