Thank you again :) this is absolutely gorgeous.

Btw... I'm nominating this :)

There are many great rhymes!Nice poem!
I loved it:)

Steven

I loved the emotion in this and the hope that will always prevail :)
Love is a gift, it has no tricks, no lies, and is something that will last forever.
Beautiful piece, good flow, and an inspiring poem that a heart can be fixed, that you don't have to be broken and alone.

Thanks for your comment on my poem- it means a lot!
Take care-

This is so sweet. The ending really made me smile :)
I love the word choice and message of this poem 5/5
Keep writing!

-X

Really good description :)

Very fascinating...sad poem..it touches my heart...the rhymes are very good..nice work=)