Comments : Don't give up

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your poem shined with such beauty and love. You don't know how much I enjoyed your writing!

    I love the easy-flowying rhymes and the short stanzas and simple words you used to get a monumental message across.

    The ending made me smile, we always have to remember to not give up because who knows what we will miss?

    A heartwarming piece, you address so much heartache and pain that a lot of people can easily relate to, yet you bring the sunshine out at the beginning and in the end.

    Made me definitely smile!
    Keep it up-
    MaryAnne