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  • 8 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Very well written. I would only suggest you not capitaliza the first letters to a continuing sentence especailly in stanza 1. Apart from that, i would also say the repetition throws off the flow of the poem so avoid that next time.

  • 8 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nicely written. I like the message of your poem, very touchy. Overall, great! Keep writing more:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Well written with a touching message behind it.