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by Paul Gondwe
Very well written. I would only suggest you not capitaliza the first letters to a continuing sentence especailly in stanza 1. Apart from that, i would also say the repetition throws off the flow of the poem so avoid that next time.
by Yrem Crish
Nicely written. I like the message of your poem, very touchy. Overall, great! Keep writing more:)
Well written with a touching message behind it.