I give a vote to the one with the beard.

I liked how you descibed this it was different than I thought just by looking at the title. I like the story here & how you described a choice. :)

Very good theme, the confusion of to stay or take a chance. Nicely written and worded for clarity..excellent

You want to run but hesitate.
Is this a trick or is it fate?

Go with him and risk it all?
Maybe fly or maybe fall?

<< My favorite part in this piece wow really deep :] it blew me away

Great writing :]

5/5
Tammi Toxic

I enjoyed reading the rhymes. They don't sound force to me.