Its not that bad is it. XX

Um um um and double ummmm x

Oh come on, i have read far much worse on this site.I think this attempt is way above the belt.XX

Its not bad at all.. and yeah, I've read much worse. Don't worry bout it

Yknow it is different.. and the story line.. it is not written like anyone elses and it gives a way for someone who reads it a chance for imagination instead of it being dry cut and you cant imagine much cause its all said/written.. I say its well written because its different..