Making the clear blue sky blush

by Ole Carsten   Mar 23, 2012


Walking along the shore,
searching for life's inner core.
Undressing in a rush,
making the clear blue sky blush.

Swimming in the deep ocean wide,
Knowing I'm there at your side.
Freedom is fuel for our love,
granted from someone above.

Challenges in life is to overcome all,
Dreaming in flood waves bunching like a ball.
Worries are piling up anyway.
Why not chose just to stay.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for you super kind comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I really absolutely think you have done an awesome job with the title. It got my attention and thought it was clever. Loved the beautiful words. Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Loved this poem, man you are fab....

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi TJ
    thaks for the great comments

    love them

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Ole Ole Ole
    First of all the title is brilliant. It caught my eye right away..
    And as always you're a romantic penning words that are beautiful

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