Evening Hour

by Lofallenve   Mar 26, 2012


At the end of day
I lie down in my bed
And imagine its you at the end of

my fingers

Brush against where you slept
Memories of tangled up skin
Play like a movie in my head
My lips break into

a smile

On my face when my phone
Lights up with your name
So far away,
But with such simple technology
You are but a small

thought away

Though not for long
The hope of the morning
Is what keeps me holding on
The knowing of seeing you tomorrow
Is what holds me on through

the day

When I see your smile at my door
When I feel your arms around me once more
Is a day where I can finally feel at home
Feel whole

once again

You have me falling for you
Deeper in a love we have created
A beautiful masterpiece
Upon a canvas with

no end

Of the day I fall asleep with thoughts
Of you that help ease me into slumber
With dreams for a small comfort
And the embrace of the blankets
Feeling again the warmth

you left

Your heart here in my hands
Waiting for the day
That you make it yours again.

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  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    A beautiful poem of love, I thought it was very interesting how you overlapped your sentences in such a way, it added a creative spark indeed.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow. Very romantic and the emotion is great. I like the way you put the hyphen and the flow is good too. This is a cool poem:)
    very good
    5/5-C

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awhh this is such a beautiful poem, its so lovely you can really tell that you love this person a lot, its just so cute!! Nice work on this lovely love poem :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm so well penned and gr8 emotion, flow is good and the over idea of the poem is gr8 good job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    Awwwww wish i had a girlfriend who would hopefully wait.i like the diction of this poem.simple yet very expressive.5/5 for me

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