Such a spiritual and touching piece.... the answers will come... very touching poem~

Like helium filling the inside of a balloon,
my brain is overwhelmed and filled with thoughts-
stressed, nervous
Just an ounce of pressure, a little pin
could pop my entire head

---- This stanza is creative.

Yeah, I also agree that the answer will come. Sometimes it comes when we least expect it.
Other times, when we are finally calm.

But the answer comes.

Oh hun there have been so many times when I felt like this, being lost and asking for help. Such a moving poem that really has touched me.

x

That really had touched me too.
The answer will come sooner or later:)
Great poem Chels:)

So spiritual.. and faithful Chelsey.
I, too, felt my heart was filled with Helium when I reached the end.. that's beautiful

What a spiritual and faithful poem...
so many times to we search for answers, in many different ways...
to turn to god shows your faith is strong, to be asking what path to take...because you don't trust your own decision, that is heartbreaking...

But I love the way this was written, just really spiritual and healing to the soul.

Great Piece
x

Let god help me find the words for this beautiful poem

This was beautifully written, and I felt this way many times before. Love it!

Stay strong and keep writing.
Jenn

Touching. i've been in this situation way too many times and praying is all you can do... great poem. 5/5

A very good and real life poem. I loved it,

Wow, just wow. Beautiful piece :)

Wow! Powerful Stuff, I think you are saying what is on all of our minds!!

Really like this one. Nice.