I love the emotion of not giving a crap anymore.... Its very short, but strong and poetic. I really loved this piece. 5/5

Just judge me
go ahead and judge me cause of my scars
just know it's you who is putting more scars on my arms
in this sentence u should end with
just know that it's you who is putting more scars upon my arms
and in this one

so go ahead judge me
it won't be the first time
or the last time
so go ahead and make my day

u can say
so go ahead and judge me cause it's wont' be the first time or the late time
so you can go on ahead and make my day of torture and pain
enough said

Ilike it it's nice and dark

A strong point we have here ....even a short piece but a powerfull one looooved it ;)