HAHAHAHA!

You had me in this memory - I felt like I was there, sinking into the sand and feeling the warmth of the sun paired with the mixture of salt in the water and breeze on my face... and then the end, had me absolutely cracking up... lol!

"as if to give me some
relief it knew
I was begging
for."

OH sand - who needs a massage or pedicure when you can just dig into the warm sand... finding the cold underneath? Ohhh what a beautiful feeling. You've played to so many of my senses here :) Amazing write!

HAHA, To begin with I remembered being on the beach in the sun, and crave that as the weather is warming here,

then I read this:

I wrap my arms
around my breasts
to try and hide the
fact that people
can now see that
the water is frozen,
without even
getting wet.

and I cracked up, you brought some happiness to my evening, THANK YOU

The humour was spot on from then onwards, and I just love the ending...

WOW
You always shock me and surprise me with your humourous pieces, I never expect it...

LOVE IT LIZ

Love ya xxxx

Lol Liz.. that is a cool write :)

I love this :D I laughed

I loved your descriptions and imagery as it made me feel like I was at the beach too.

What I love about your work is that it always pulls me in and I always find something I can grasp and relate to. You are a powerful writer who knows how to capture the readers intrest.

Another great write

5/5

Lol,

The breeze and the sun and the salty water.
The cold that comes after wards and the feeling that this piece made my body remembered. Haha pretty awesome.

I've been to the beach a few times but I never got in the water, I have only walk in the shore. But still I can picture the coldness.

Lol:) great poem, I enjoyed reading it:)

I LOVE THIS POEM...... You are so creative Liz-
Your unique approach to freezing cold ocean water is divine!!!!! very nice!

I LOVE THIS POEM...... You are so creative Liz-
Your unique approach to freezing cold ocean water is divine!!!!! very nice!

Wonderful poem Liz. I love going to the beach. As a matter of fact - we Brazilian people love the sea. Lovely piece.

I loved it :) everythings great 5/5

Got to go with all the other comments :) brilliant , entertaining and excellent