Good poem, you can really see pieces of you. The line "I'm a girl who collects rocks" sounds simple and ordinary, and it shows how a simple person can be a mask for somebody feeling lots of emotions, and not all of them good. It's excellent. 5/5 Keep writing

Ivlove this poem,it's amazing and truly emotional and it has a lot of voice and image in it.Fantastic work. 5/5 for sure.