Ole with each poem you get better and better. More original, more creative and more romantic..I enjoy your work very much..
Excellent

The best poem, love your twist in the poem

Hi TJ

Thanks for your comment, I am so lucky to be a part of a club, where I can improve a bit from time to time. Your comments is really nice. You make me wich for more improvement from my side

I love coffee too.... and this poem is wonderful!

"I long to sit there
Ordering two cups
Espresso with water
Feeling you lips again. "
^^^

love the ending.... awesome write Ole-

Hi
Thanks your comment is a big pleasure for me

Br
Ole

God, how I feel this!

I feel this, I do. I am soooo into your word choice, into your everything. I am just in awe!

I want to read this over and over again and just never stop and... Ugh I love it! I just purely do...

The breaks where lines just break didn't feel to me odd or anything, they just felt well-placed and had their own meaning. Wow.

I never read your work before but I promise I'll be a regular reader for ya!
Great and pure poetry! Please keep writingggggggg!