Comments : Drown In The Crimson Tide

  • 11 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Aww sad but good :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mello193

    Pretty emotional. i wouldn't use "idk" though, it rhymed really well and was overall good.

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    This is a good one deserve 5/5 keep on =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a really good poem. . . I liked it a lot, I like dark sad poetry a lot and you've penned it well in this poem. . . . ... There is a lot of self-loathing in this poem and I totally understand that, understand how you can feel this hurt. ...how you can feel like a bad person for hurting the one you love. . . and then take it out on yourself.. this was a good poem..nice work

  • 11 years ago

    by Angel

    This is really sad but its really good.

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A sad poem, self loathing but I liked it.
    A poem from the Heart.
    Keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    :( i can feel your pain by reading this and seeing how truly sorry you are; the only thing is i would change "idk" ... and i wouldn't use it so much, maybe try to find some better words that might fill those spaces.