Chelsey

I simply adore the metaphors in this poem. The image of the riverbank and you floating in there to the direction of your lover is so beautiful.

I love the image as well of the clouds forming hearts. It makes me think of when I was a kid and looked up at the clouds to wonder what shape they looked like.

It's an awesome poem describing the connection that you have with your lover as well as how nature around you changes.

Simply beautiful

x

Stunning piece Chels.The images are lovely.

To me it sounded more like Natural response, something that usually happens when one is in love. So I see why the title is call natures response.

I like the creativity and my favorite part is when you mention the hearts forming in the clouds.
I find that so sweet.

A Nature love letter----- thats how i felt while I read this poem Chelsey!!! Ohhhhh the romantic feeling is very pretty!!!!

"Mere thoughts of you are somehow
uttered into the environment melodically"

so creative and romantic... love these lines!!

"Floating along the stream of loves riverbank
my hair swirls in the current thats moving towards you
My back feeling the temperatures change in the water
when you go from happy to over-joyed"

You've created a lovely picture for us reader to lose ourselves in with this stanza, it's nice, those last two lines and I may be wrong how I interpreted them but when two people form a strong bind they're able to feel things that only a connection can bring.

"Clouds above me forming hearts
Birds whistling romantic tunes
Rhythmically making tree branches sway
Causing dead leaves to twirl on the ground"

Is it not amazing what love can do, it inserts a reason into a persons life than can change anything for better or worse, it opens up a beauty around the world we'd otherwise miss, love makes the simplest thing beautiful when you have someone to share it with, this stanza is such a marvellous portrayal of that, it's what love can do, and it's perfectly pictured simply with words.

"Mere thoughts of you are somehow
uttered into the environment melodically
Arousing my spirit and enriching my soul,
invigorating natures response"

It's as I said above, love can intertwine itself in anything and everything, from the smallest thing to the biggest, it gives us the power to associate the love we feel for said person with beautiful things we see around us, a reminder, on both parts that not everything is sour in this world, when all it takes is one little thing to grow into something that defines us all. Very well written, you expressed love brilliantly.

"Floating along the stream of loves riverbank
my hair swirls in the current thats moving towards you
My back feeling the temperatures change in the water
when you go from happy to over-joyed"

You've created a lovely picture for us reader to lose ourselves in with this stanza, it's nice, those last two lines and I may be wrong how I interpreted them but when two people form a strong bind they're able to feel things that only a connection can bring.

"Clouds above me forming hearts
Birds whistling romantic tunes
Rhythmically making tree branches sway
Causing dead leaves to twirl on the ground"

Is it not amazing what love can do, it inserts a reason into a persons life than can change anything for better or worse, it opens up a beauty around the world we'd otherwise miss, love makes the simplest thing beautiful when you have someone to share it with, this stanza is such a marvellous portrayal of that, it's what love can do, and it's perfectly pictured simply with words.

"Mere thoughts of you are somehow
uttered into the environment melodically
Arousing my spirit and enriching my soul,
invigorating natures response"

It's as I said above, love can intertwine itself in anything and everything, from the smallest thing to the biggest, it gives us the power to associate the love we feel for said person with beautiful things we see around us, a reminder, on both parts that not everything is sour in this world, when all it takes is one little thing to grow into something that defines us all. Very well written, you expressed love brilliantly.