Wow!!!..Your poem blew my socks off! So much Love and passion, the type of poems I Love!!
Well done, a really great poem.
I look forward to reading more from you.
Must go now, just have to read your poem again..!
8 years ago
Perfect title for this bittersweet love poem. The longing for this peson is penned so strong-taking over every part of your being. A love this strong is worth persuing I'd think. At any rate, you pulled me inside your poem and I was emotionally attached to it by the ending. Great piece!
Than you for the lovely comment on one of the first (of many)poem I have shared with the public. I believe that sharing your poetry is like sharing your heart and baring ones soul. Just as in love there is risk....but it is worth every moment.
Wow, this one is really awesome. From the first line to the ending, there is not a single word that shouldnt be there, I mean youve chosen the best words to create this lovely poem. If your next poems are like this, you bet Ill read them.