Tim bro

what a poem hein?Sublime!

(our hearts and minds were never fair in shape anyway)

^ A super image, Timothy, portraying how much disconnection you two have between each other.

You were kind, I were kind,

^ I was?

This piece has a unique aura; some delicacy in thoughts... but it's mastered in wording and figurative language.

The last line is stellar:

I guess lust was sneezing at times.

^ I had to ponder what you meant with this. maybe it's related to the 'jar of worms' (by the way, I think you were mocking the song 'jar of hearts' with this play on words?).... where 'worms' replace 'heart' ?

Just beautiful, anyways.

I love this one, well done : )

Awesome poem! The title intrigued me but freaked me out a little, the whole jar of worms image came to my head and I was like ewww worms lol. Then I thought to myself if I can watch "The Walking Dead" I can certainly read this!

Awesome write

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