I see this as a song :] esp that last part, I would love to hear it played..wonder how the notes would be!

A very sad piece, described the situation of many girls and boys at a certain level, the only thing that i know is, no body needs to realize we're there, for us to be happy and proud, love starts from lovig our ownselves 1st, if we cant love ourselves we cant love nor be loved.

dont expect nice gestures nor kindess from someone who lacks it, who doesnt have..cannot give.

well done! smie in your opening line, should be smile?

Xxx

"if only you can see the pain, the scars on her
heart."
I really like this part.. So heart-breaking.

I hope you're not writing this for your own loss. I know how hard it is to lose someone. This is another great piece, Tammi. Certainly one of your best :) 5/5

-X

Very heartbreaking. Life isn't fair at times.
Walking around with a mask, smiling, hiding the pain. It has fooled many people. 5/5