That spoke to me so sternly and almost made me sop, amazing describtion and wording and verses and so on 100/100

I really enjoyed this poem. Very emotionally. It touches the reader and gets them thinking. 5/5

Good one...keep up a good work:=)

Thankyou you all for your comments they encourage me to write more

XD you'd think it's so hard to reach out to hurting people because no one dose it and it can eventually end with death.