Comments : Demonic Dance

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey beautiful!

    Yes indeed this is quite a dark poem. I love the images you can see. Powerful for a short write!

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Darkness scowls-

    My prison becomes
    a tattoo- markings
    of a mystery, etched
    upon my soul....

    ^^ creeeeppyyy...I find that I'm starting to like some dark poems from certain people because the words you use with them are so interesting....

    Darkness scowls..LOVED that line! perfect word! It really brings darkness to life, in a bitter mean way...

    That last stanza was amazing as always, your way of expressing ANYTHING always has some sort of poetic beauty to it! And this was supposed to be dark! LOL I find beauty in all of your poems!

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Dark and eerie.Loved it.