HOPE

by rock serenade   Apr 17, 2012


When the light goes out

When the leaves die

When the shadows come to stay

When you feel like you're alone

When the dreams become hard to follow

When there's no one to dry these tears

That are drowing you in darkness

Be sure that I'll be there for you

I'll grab the smiles from all the mouths

Of those who made you cry

I'll take the sorrow and let it grow

In all the hearts that hurt you

I'll make you laughing ,I'll make you happy

You'll try to know who I am

You'll hear my voice ,you'll feel my existence

but you will never see me ....or

Maybe you'll by following your dreams

cuz I'am that thing called HOPE

H: hurt is gone
O: only happiness
P: pure love
E: everytime and everywhere ...Iam there

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Love it, definitely great to have someone that will be there for you through darkness and sunshine. :) great job, keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "That are drowing you in darckness"
    Darckness--darkness

    "I'll take your sorrow and grow it"
    I think it would be better if you change it to: "I'll take the sorrow and let it grow"

    "In all the hearts that hurted you"
    Hurted--hurt

    "You'll hear my voice ,you'll feel my
    existance"
    existance---existence

    Love your definition of hope in the end. A great read 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like this poem great use of imagery :-)

    I really liked

    "I'll grab the smiles from all the mouths
    Of those who made you cry "

    Just a fantastic line well done :-) 5/5