Wow its sad, but I really enjoyed reading this poem, it says a lot.

Do you remember?
when I linger through your mind all night long.
when a dove use to sing our favourite song.
when you infiltrated my heart with a single touch.
when I scorch off your fears with my single smile.
when I broke down the rules to show my desire.
when you sneak through your worries to show you admire.
^^
This was my fav part well done:)

Awwwwww isoooooo wannna cry with that one!

Thank u... I'll trying my best to write a better poem...

When our mind use to speak the same language
when our heart use to beat the same sound.

^^^ this lines are precious, I love them.

Thanks!

Aw its so cute! I can relate to this like crazy it describes me and my boyfriend alot. I never thought it possible to feel like 5 years have gone by when not seeing him for only two days. And when im with him all day it only seems like an hour or to.

"When our mind use to speak the same language
when our heart use to beat the same sound." these lines fit us so well.
its weird how like I can usually finish his sentences and we have like the same train of thought.
Cute poem and nice flow

This is so sweet. :) 5/5

Do you remember who i used to be very sweet poem :) 5/5

Really good poem :) 5/5

Thanx for the nice comment..

So beautiful..n full with emotions..i do hope ur someone remembers it all *_*