Comments : Divine Presence ( Double Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a lovely nature double haiku. I love the images in this poem. It flows well and fills me with peace when I read the words.
    Awesome write hun! You are a Goddess!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I loved this piece, It feels peaceful and tranquil, the birds flow beyond time.. freely!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhh how beautiful!!!! very pretty double haiku!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was beautiful Karla! You did so good with this and again I appreciate the dedication! That was very sweet of you!

    <3

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Tho am nt familiar with Haiku..i love the way u dd t.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ahhh yes...mother earth is divine..for she has given us herself, her beauty and undying freshness..I like the placid, pleasant and serene image your write drew in my mind..lovely!