Comments : Hope I'm not too late

  • 13 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You did great

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    I agree. pretty awesome.

  • 13 years ago

    by Max

    Wow
    the is lovely and great
    i love the emotion in this one and the word choice is good too
    5/5 amazing keep on =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Spellbound by your smile, laughter and eyes
    like a rose you are always looking beautifull
    You've become too close to my heart
    The thought of your smile makes me die and be reborn,I miss you always...

    This was my fav stanza. Just the first lines alone made it for me. You have penned it well. One would think that you actually wrote this but to think you just copied and pasted your previous poems, very interesting and i must say, its very creative.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kota the Unheard

    WOW if i did that it would be MESSED UP since i write suiside, depression,an love fantastic. U ar great