Hey Chelsey :)
Unspoken wwords can hurt more than spoken ones sometimes even more. Heres what I got lol....

I thought it was physically impossible
to be stung by venom
through unspoken words
Experience, however, has taught me
silent words scream the loudest

^^^^ I love this opening. You make it apparent that someone not talking to you is as painful as a snakebite..that really hurt more than if they had said something bad. I dont like word/words used twice here so I'd make the last line:
Silence screams the loudest..

Tormenting me with a quiet house
filled with thunderous thoughts
shaking me to the core of my being
as I await any type of communication
from you
^^^ Everything is quiet adding to the silence from this person and it is almost driving you crazy...

Somehow in your twisted mind
you find this will bring us closer
I assure you,
being in a conversation with myself
only gives me confidence
that I can survive on my own

^^^Absence makes the heart grow fonder or out of sight out of mind??? The silence is making you stronger though

Transmitting empty messages
gives me reason to believe
I will have a lifetime of
living with your hushed hugs
and wishing for understanding
of your silent speech

^^^^^You arent getting what you want from this person, I really loved hushed hugs Chels,
makes me wonder why they are hushed..
I hope they come around! Great poem Kiddo!
Lostlove~

Chels, that was a beautiful write..

Silent words scream the loudest...the end is also beautiful

Thats true...talkin of t am in such a stuation ..it hurts wen only slnc shouts in ua ears..gud words said

Chelsey,

I am a firm believer in the fact that actions speak louder than words, and when nothing is said, a thousand other things say it instead...

I loved this piece, the strength was in the wording and the flow was smooth and transitional which really brought me into the piece

You always have a way that captivates me and makes me feel what I read

Love it
xxxx

"I assure you,
being in a conversation with myself
only gives me confidence
that I can survive on my own"

that was such a wise statement.
now, I wanna Quote you...

damn Chels,

youse been growing as a poet...
your pieces seem to have been getting,
more honest, more direct, more harsh if I may say so, its like you sound sarcastic and angry and bitter all in once..

Keep it up Soxii!

Great piece~

Great lines!

Oh Chelsey I loved this poem. Such a strong piece filled with emotions and heartache. It reminds me of the silent treatment where one person in the relationship or friendship does not speak to the other and pretty much ignores them. I've done it a few times. It could be also that this is a relationship where the two people are just not in the same place anymore and it's more routine rather than love. What a sad and heartbreaking piece!

Loved it

x

I dont' know what to say other than what you already know things happen for a reason and most of the times, they happen to prepare us for something better. This one was heartbreaking piece.

Chelsey, I love this.
I can relate to long gone relationship that still bothers me.