Dang!! one question dude! can i borrow this when i get married? just asking dude cause dang i would cry if that was told to me by my beloved and if i do get married the poor sucker will need to top this one! no kidding dude i will litterally get the papers to divorse anyone if they don't top this vow! :)

I love it

I love it

Wow left me breathless (:

So amazing when you finally meet that one person that will fill you inside from the pain you felt. To finally be happy and to not feel pain. Beautiful story!

with this blood stained wedding ring, with anything this world will bring, I will love ya through everything. so would you be my wife? can you end all pain,, can i trust you with my life?"

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Really loved this stanza in the poem!
The last question can I trust you with my life, wow so powerful.

The rhyme in each line made the poem really good
And the flow was great

Beautiful 100/5

Speechless.. this is beautifull

anything i type in here cannot complement this enough

This is so sweet and beautiful. 5/5

Such a wonderful dedication

Em