Wow. Just, wow. Breathtaking poem. Your word choice is amazing. The beauty in this is so overwhelming. Great job! 5/5 and favorite :)

"Scrawled in red are these words
Each woven with the yarns of colourful birds
To one who solely embeds my heart with love"

The above lines are simply loveable, though I'm not sure what it means but I will tell you what I think of them, I think that you will write letters of passion( red symbolizes passion if I'm not mistaken and pink is for love) and so for that someone who is able to make you feel love, you will write love poems with colorful words. I can't really explain it but I found them fun and lovely because within my mind I'm picturing the birds and they holding a piece of paper with colorful words and poems written on that paper.

The metaphors and imagery are amazing. The rhymes flowed well, but kinda off in some parts..
Overall, a really beautiful piece. 5/5 :)

-X

Amazingly beautiful..very good work..i like this line...

Scrawled in red are these words
Each woven with the yarns of colourful birds
To one who solely embeds my heart with love
My goddess of delight sent from above

keep writing more beautiful works=)5/5

A nice poem Joseph. I like it. So much feeling there.

This is lovely piece,I like it alot,emotion in it is amazing and flow is cool
5/5 keep on =)

"Scrawled in red are these words
Each woven with the yarns of colourful birds
To one who solely embeds my heart with love"

Those are truly beautiful words!
The flow was kinda off toward the end... But you expressed something deep here, and thats all that matters great write! 5/5
Jenn

The metaphors and imagery are amazing..
Flow is prfct..smooth..

Wow this poem is great, i really enjoyed reading it :) the flow is amazing! 5/5

Wow!Joseph, amazing write, the flow is awesome
...every word she let's fall
...she's more endowed than Solomon's mine's.
^my favorite lines.
kudos.

Wow!Joseph, amazing write, the flow is awesome
...every word she let's fall
...she's more endowed than Solomon's mine's.
^my favorite lines.
kudos.

Beautiful and amazing wording 5/5

Because she is more endowed than the King
Solomon's mines.... Wow!

Nice flow. Good write:)