Cleverly write. Nice poem. Keep writing:=)
5/5

Wow.. Perhaps the only rhyming love poem I really enjoyed reading xD

No criticism whatsoever. Really well-written

Thanks

Wonderful decision of words and flow. I really joyed reading this, and I don't know who wouldn't, great job, 100/100, can't wait to read more, have a nice day

Wonderful decision of words and flow. I really joyed reading this, and I don't know who wouldn't, great job, 100/100, can't wait to read more, have a nice day

Wonderful flow throughout, and very sweet and touching. 5/5