Wow.. good write..vividly written and imaginary...I like the way you deliver your imagination with a dream..well-done=)keep writing more beautiful stuff",

Ahhhwww...it was like living in a dream and suddenly realized it was all a dream. hehe very nice poem...all da best!!!!

I love when you read it you feel like your right there in the moment

I love when you read it you feel like your right there in the moment

What a great poem you have there.. :)

I love dreaming lie this it's too bad we all have to have bad dreams or have our dreams ripped out from under us as we try to live them out... I love the poem