Broken

A poem so many can relate to, my advice is to always do the things that make you happy.

"Will we ever be alive" - Great line, beautifully written overall

5/5

mandy :)

Omg this is so good!

Have you ever tried to love?
when you find the one
you propose 
she says yes
you dance and kiss
but then things twist
and your life flips
you think "hows this going to end?"
you beg
you cry
how long untill it dies?
will we ever be alive?

^
Finding the one you truly love is hard
Proposing to her wanting to spend the rest of your life with her.

But then sometimes it changes and you begin to question, is this going to last or die fast? Will we ever be alive?

Such a beautiful penned poem
Beautiful flow!

5/5!