Comments : The feeling I felt after I went to Auschwitz...

  • 13 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Very descriptive! good job :)

    • 13 years ago

      by Elise

      Thank you very much :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    Oh elise beautiful rhyming! It just flows from one line to the next! That was very beautifully written... But shame the poor girl!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    Oh elise beautiful rhyming! It just flows from one line to the next! That was very beautifully written... But shame the poor girl!!

    • 13 years ago

      by Elise

      Thank you! I had a task to write about Auschwitz after my visit and I decided to use a story of one of the girls and put it into the poem. As in Auschwitz many had killed themselves by sharp objects, exotion or frowing themselves onto electric wires because work was too tiering. They lived in awful conditions and even 1 poem will never describe all the horror that I saw there! Every time I remember it I cry it was awful! :'(

  • 13 years ago

    by Omar aka Amor

    I loved it!
    I don't see why you feel like you failed.
    Your rhyming was nice and smooth.
    Great imagery.
    You brought the emotions to life
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Elise

    Thank you*.* That's very kind of you :)