I really love this one syrup i must have read three or four time and it makes me smile more each time i read it :-) Ive never heard of this style before but i love the effect it has ...fantastic! Xx

Beautiful. beautiful, beautiful.

Wow! Andrea, you can really write form poetry really well this one was not an exception. I like the simple words and specially the ending. It's so beautiful. It also made me smile when I read it.

Yup I agree, you the queen of form poetry..

I find it really sweet, I really love it great job:)

Such a powerful, melodic, smooth going poem.. you nailed this form!

My my, Andrea. This is simply beautiful. I love how you have presented this formed poem. Such beauty in the words and the form itself. It made my heart smile.

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If I could give you a longer comment I WOULD...but all i can say is this is truly beautiful!! Your words knocked me off my feet, this poem was pretty, just like the girl being described!

Sorry for double post, apparently thats how much i liked it lol