Comments : Daddy

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Aww :/ 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Elise

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by symonelouise27

    This is very well written and you have conveyed the strong emotions well. I can relate to this, to an extent. I really like this one though :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Very nice poem... Very emotional... And I can understand what u meant about the stanzas... How are mine going By The Way?

    • 12 years ago

      by Elise

      Yours are very good Amy and thank you very much for your coments they have inspired me to write my new poem. (I have alredy posted it)

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great poem. You really expressed a lot of emotion here of pain and sorrow. All in all a great write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Love it!!!!<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Elise

    Thank you very much:) your views are very impotant to me :) Feel free to correct me anytime ;)