Beautiful, just beautiful.
Love will find a way..

Agreed ^ beautiiful!
your imagery was amazing, felt like i took the journey myself haha

i feel this flowed nicely
keep it up!
5/5 from me =)

This is amazing
the flow was nice
5/5 =)

Stunning piece. I think you have painted a wonderful image and your voice was really very clear. Great job

It's so beautiful.
If it pertains to you I wish you the best.
The love is so adamant and beautiful.
It was so well written.
I love the choice of words and the imagery.
5/5

This is so full of emotions and the imagery was fascinating!
"I doth know the miles, I doth know the way back to thou.
Mine own heart is tethered to that of thou.
The vows of till-death-do-us-part may not have been said,
But in a selfish act, in a declarative way,
I claim thou as mine own."
When feeling such over powering love you know how many outcomes there can be but you could never imagine what it would be like to have to go back. I claim thou as mine own, haha i loved this line, it made me smile and get all bubbly.

"Ah, I have found you at last?
And seemingly in those first few blissful times,
We were graced with, the company of one another,
We had exchanged our own hearts,
Without our own knowledge, until the last moment of truth."
Sometimes we never really know how much we love someone until you look back at those first few moments and it sort of strikes you!

"This realization at the wrong time, the wrong moment.
Life has gouged its beautiful dagger between, a wedge.
Keeping thou from me, and me from thou."

This part was so sad, I know what its like to not be able to love the one you do. I like the way you put it though, "Life has gouged its beautiful dagger between, a wedge."

The only thing that kind of confused me was the beginning, I didn't really know what was going on, but other than that it was a great great poem.

5/5

Like everyone else said! I felt like I was living the poem while I was reading it!

Great Job!

5/5

Nice imagery and nice emotions that's all i gotta say! :)