Comments : Once Upon A Time

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You need to stop feeling guilty, nothing you did.. It does happen that a certain person
    does not love us back the way we were hoping for. Quite natual this so called wall
    will grow higher and higher. God has
    something planned, something wonderful
    and this person will be placed into your life
    when the time is right

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    That's just simply sad!

    Ezio, I feel these days that whenever I read a poem, I can relate! What's happening? haha. I liked this, simple and the flow was not forced. You just let yourself out and it turned out to be great!

    Thanks for being a supportive friend and for writing such amazing poetry, thanks for sharing it with us!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I agree you musn't feel guilty:)
    Sad but good poem Josh:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    WOW such a sad and complex poem!
    Life can be full of many obstacles but it is from this that we learn.
    Love simply sucks in one form or another it may be "sweet" as some people say but more often than not it is a poison seeking deeply within your skin slowly taking away all the things you hold dear replacing it with pain, hate and hurt that never gives in.
    An important thing to remember is that you are not alone and that there will be someone out there for you. You may not find her now or next week but you will often find them when you least expect it. Dont always seek love let love seek you that way it is more involved and wants to be there for you! Never feel guilty things will get better soon. Im sure it is.

    Poems like this are often hard to write but they are simply from the inner most depths of your heart. I can feel the emotion woven throughout every word. The pain and the hurt echoing through the depths of loves blistering wounds.
    Never give up! Love always finds a way!

    5.5 from me