I'm not sure about this one, it's one of my first poems.

It's good buuuuuuut, nope nothing bad about it. Very sweet :)

Thanks :)

This was a great poem. You did really well here. This would be like a free verse poem. Not so much with rhyming but it was done very well. You showed a lot of emotion here. All in all a great write. :)

Okay the second stanza third line feather should be feathers because it is plural in the sense you wrote it. It is one of those english grammar things that can be frustrating and I think u meant two instead of tow in your title. But I actually really liked this one, the story you told and the idea of flying is romantic in a sense and it was a free verse poem but it was very well written and I think it had nice flow and meaning.