I didn't take your poem:\

This one was a good piece, what I understood is that perhaps you are talking about different cultures and so it must be tough for families to accept it. But despise that you want to prove them wrong that it will work out.

Love it so emotionel really good work

Thanx:) reli appreciate the comment

Ya its emotional:)
Well written:)

Thank u :)

Wow! This was really good and I loved how you described moments between the two people but just on a side note, it is spelled steal not steel, but other than that critique I thought your poem was perfect! 5/5

Thank you:) I will watch out for spelling next time. Thank u so much for the comment!

In response to Orchid, I thought that "steel" was intentional after seeing "gold" because unlike gold, which is a pure element, steel is an alloy, a mix of elements (it is impure) thus justifying the title "unjustified love".
Other than this fact I agree with everyone else and find this a pleasant and emotional read.