Comments : My Khal

  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    I love it!! :D kahleesi moon of my life

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    This is nice xD
    i dk what to say more so would it be
    5/5 keep writing=)??
    yeh it would be that thanks for posting this xD

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Thanks for the explanation at the end, it made me go over it again. . . . and I totally get it

    "Khal of my heart, my Sun and my Stars, my love for you is forever and always."

    such a deep and powerful piece of poetry you have written here, nice work

    5/5