Yes i can see this is such a sad poem..

yes i can see i love it.

yes i can see you really did well in this piece.

yes i can see its full of emotions.

i will always read your poems
and always be your side... :)

you will see :)

You always write from the heart and it shows

the feelings you have that are so felt from your words in your great gift of writing

Very touching, I enjoyed it, great job

Mst of ur poems sound like sngs,i cn actualy sing them..
And as i can see, dis one is jus too gud..prfct..

Very touchy poem..I have nothing to say but a big WOW! As, usual this is a great piece from you. I love reading your stuff. Keep writing:))
5/5
~C

Great piece of writing. Sounds like you suffered a great loss. I find that writing does the pain justice and your writing does wonders. Great job.