I love the imaginary on this piece it took me back to some movies that I have watched before. When I read the part about while a lunatic howls a werewolf came to my mind and thus since I started reading this piece I was picturing people dancing under the wicked moon along some fire and singing aloud while the werewolf was howling.

This might not be what the poem is about but it sure made some creative images to come to my mind and I love that.

Edit: it also made me picture some one who is in so much pain.

I, too loved the imagery yo used in this poem

"dancing scorpions sting my eyes
leaving me lifeless, broken at midnight"

fantastic lines you have written here, you can really tell how badly someone is hurtingg...i love the use of scorpions stings. . . and leaving you lifeless, its a tragic poem but a excellent one :)

Congratulationssssssss on your very deserving win! You rocked our club contest with your poem, I'm so happy for ya!!!!

I read it twice and was like OMGGG formed poetry I've been dying to try something and she came up with a .....omgggggg

FIVE five five and a very high five! mwa

I love the dark images here! It's awesome.

Short but dark and powerful!

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