Love shack

by sun spots   May 4, 2012


Getting nervous,
no not much.
My mind is made,
just need your touch.
In a week i will be,
giving you all of me.
Give yourself,
no holding back.
Let's enjoy this love attack,
and shake the walls.
of our love shack.

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  • 13 years ago

    by sun spots

    Thats understandable, i mean how often do we do something like this in a life time.Once. XX

  • 13 years ago

    by sun spots

    Im getting nervous I have to admit x

  • 13 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    I see where your trying to get at, but I couldn't really get a sense of flow, there wasn't too much imagery but keep writing!!

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