Comments : What do i have to do for you

  • 13 years ago

    by Kate

    That was trully beautiful... A lot of people can relate to that. It's horrible having your heart broken like that but amazing to find that love will always exist in your heart no matter how much it hurts. Very good

  • 13 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    This is a sweet but sad poem it's very unhealthy to love someone that's in love with someone else. I think the quality of loyalty is wonderful, but sometimes we can fool ourselves into thinking that loyalty means being use. Nice write...