The style you use in writing this is very interesting to read. The poem was sad, the content was good and really touching. Keep it up

I do love this write of yours. Very sad, deep and scary. Those who know how it feels can relate very well to this. Your feelings seemed to pour out. Good job.
5/5
~Kitty

Deep

This is very amazing and touching.
Came really deep and emotional.
Love it.
5/5
-Midnitee Kitten

WOW.... thats all i really know to say! its just absolutely magnificent!

I have to agree that this poem is indeed very deep. You kept up the flow well, which made it easy to read. I could feel the emotion in it, I know the feeling in which you describe in your poem.
5/5 beautiful.

Very deep. you are so talented! 5/5

Very deep and emotional. Great job :)

You penned your despair here eloquently, venting your sadness into a poem, one of most beautiful things about being a poet.

Wow this is very cool. it's so deep and dark. the imagery is amazing. great jog! 5/5

Great, very descripting. i could actually imagine it