Comments : The Battle we faced!<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Illusion

    Very beautiful poem..
    Hold me in your arms and whisper the many magic
    words you and i can only speak
    Kiss away the many scars I have holded for as long
    as eternity comes and goes
    Remember those times that we had been so young to
    know what we had?
    With a beautiful flow and a beautiful message too..

  • 11 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    It is indeed a lovely message you have written here in this poem. :) Beautiful words. ^_^
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Nice lines...
    Good Job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Lovely poem
    i like the story it is telling
    really enjoyed and the flow was cool too
    the word choice was fine

    i just like it xD
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Lovely poem. Good job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful, inspiring, blew me away, all your poems are amazing, can't wait to read this again

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A really nice worded story (not really a poem), but your words were really nice to read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Lovely story, wonderful words a true lover can only speak, or in this case write, lol. You did real good here, real good. Keep it up.