Comments : Darkened Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Whoa.. what a twist..
    i love this part~~
    All the light around me suddenly turns dark
    Everything that was pure and white
    Is tainted with sin
    And turn in to flames
    One day an angel in Heaven
    The next I am in Hell
    From Heaven to hell
    Because of one temptation
    One mistake sealed my fate~~
    it is the most powerful part to me in this poem..
    great write! :)
    5/5