This is a powerful piece,my comrade. Keep it up!

"skies" instead of "sky's".

I like the imagery. It works really well and paints a beautiful and tender image of a world that many people see as bad.

I like the idea of the poem. Giving the positive and the beauty in something that is bigger than us all. In a world with so much going on and where the negative outweighs the good.

Nice.