Comments : Life sentence

  • 11 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love the part when you say am i walking with a scarlet letter. that is really deep for those that have read the book lol but back to all seriousness.. that is really touching that its like people can be so judgmental to the point where it is unbearing and overwhelming.. its like being trapped in a field of judgment but yknow something that i too am learning.. when someone is always talking down on you they feel low of themselves and they are in misery and we all know misery loves company.. they too are trying to make their selves feel better about their selves by lowering others self esteem but if they have you as the main attraction in their world let them for they can not do any more harm but have you controlling them because they will always be wondering how they can get at you but if you dont retaliate when they are being so judgmental then they have nothing left to say.. they can only think whatever they want to but yknow like i stated before they are letting you control them cause you are their main focus/attraction in their world. life is to short to worry about what others think of you. live life to the fullest.. laugh love smile :).. awesome write though. i love how you brought your words together and the part about the scarlet letter i say again..
    10/10
    excellent job!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I really like this. It's true , who gets to say they can judge people . Everyone is different, different isn't bad because if everyone was the same then life would be full of boring mannequins. you should be able to be who you are and not be afraid of being judged for it .

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses Bleed

    "am I walking with a scarlet letter"
    I know so many people with this problem, and this whole poem also connected straight to my heart, because people also jusge me a lot, and I know what it is like to deal with that, but that line above communicates it pretty well, especially if you have read the book!

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Wow this poem really hit home for me. I think its amazing cause a lot of readers can actually understand where your coming from. If not they can get a little glimpse. For example my favorite line<I walking with a scarlet letter
    It describes so little but acts as a large refrence to a story a lot of people understand. But i like to see the judgement as an oppertunity for better not to let them brand me with their opinions. Cause in the end to me our own judgement on ourselves is what we have to live with. Althoug when your getting juged by a large crowd your self judgement reflects theirs. In the end i love teh way it flowed, short but sweet. I love the style you captivated the truth.