Awesome awesome piece, what a healing piece

To ease the pain and to ignore how I truly feel
But they told me to write. They told me to give more
So this is my cry , the pouring out of how alone I felt
when you decided your world was more important than mine

I can really tell that you did pour our your emotions in this poem, it shows throughout the whole poem.. that you just poured it into this poem, it was deep and very emotional read. . nicely penned Chelsey I love your word choice... :)

5/5

This is really a pouring out of emotion in this piece, I like the smoothness and also the vent.
It feels good to let it out. Nicely done.

This is my favorite part and the one I feel you have pour out the most emotion.

"I can only imagine how you bashed my name
called me the less caring, the non-supporter
But I...I have yet to give my side of the story
Of how I felt attacked and betrayed,
Forgotten and ignored,
Belittled and mistaken"

D whole poem ws gud ,bt d 4th stanza speaks much ..al lines r prfct..liked it

I have tip toed around my own poetry, hiding how I feel
Using metaphors, soft spoken words
to ease the pain and to ignore how I truly feel
But they told me to write. They told me to give more
So this is my cry , the pouring out of how alone I felt

^
I'm happy you took by my advice and wrote what you truly feel without those metaphors that stop you most of the time from expressing freely what you feel inside... I am always feeling like am enchained just because I must perfect my wording and all but since a while I began to be more spontanious and that made me even more comfortable while writing!

I wish you all the best, friend. :)

Oh what a poem

You may live in a world where things are one sided,
where you are always right, and your feelings...
Not a happy line there, but well done and well composed

This definitely feels like a poem you needed to get out of your system. I love it!

It's so sad but there's this strong element to the words in the end like you're standing up for yourself and just giving it to them.

Loved it

x