Comments : Detailed murder

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Well written

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I can really relate to this poem alot i used to cut myself i know to feel the pain when you first cut yourself i can feel this poem very touching and filled with emotion i getting teared up readiing this poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow this was really really good. An intersting write !! I love it 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    Wow Jesse. That made me cry sweetie. I hope you don't feel like that anymore. If something is bothering you feel free to talk to me about it. Love you bestie. :) <3 5/5 from me.