So saaad! And so deep. But I want to suggest something. :)

Capitalize your 'i's and don't capitalize the first letter of every line! That's it.

Well-done.

Really sad very well written poem i like the title :)

Chances are, I may get lost
Chances are, I never return back
still into the danger I go deep
caring angles once again weep

I was really impressed with this part because the stubbornness of human is captured here. Knowing that danger lies ahead, we still blunder into it. But I don't understand the last sentence; do you mean angels instead of angles?

I loved this poem.. so dark nd deep ..i think its endless not enless in the second last stanza... over all.. amazing job.. u wrote it so wonderfully... well done! keep the good work up!! =)

I really liked this poem, Is dark and your emotion showed through. Great write, keep it up!

Love the flow and emotion, great job. :) 5/5

Wow I'm speachleas really, it rhymes perfectly and wow it's deep and written amazingly with great wording, it even has imagery :D I loved it,,it's really really good,,magnificent job 5/5

And may I just say nomination for a job well done :0)

Such an impact! Paint a stark picture that just draws the reader in. Very well written. 5/5

Alisha

Wow this poem is really good sweety! :)

Lady Anastasia

Another great job keep it up :)

Another great job keep it up :)

This is some powerful stuff great job